I have a pure 2WF and he seems to fair well. Only real weakness ( for most pure fighter builds) is he isnt very self reliant, in other words he needs a healer to keep him alive but he does dish out the damage. Not being self reliant may make some groups annoyed, but you'll pull you weight in the DPS department. Now mine is half-orc so its a little different but if I were you:
1. I would drop the skill focus Intimidate- you will pull enough aggro without it and your not really a "tank" so you will not really
want to pull aggro of everything around you. It will get you killed even faster. Intimidate is for builds that can survive the aggro
generally speaking.
2. drop the THF feat and shield deflection. Unless your planning on building a "tank" or a 2HF, these feats will not really benefit you
there are feats that will benet you more as a TWF.
3. drop force of personality. You can drop Charisma, since you dont need Intimidate, and raise Con. More HP's. You can get more will
saves fro enhanceents
4. Thats 4 feats to replace. Take Kopesh= lots of crits and big numbers... take power critical = bigger crits....take stunning blow = mob
beater and you can get your strength high enough to be useful....Take toughness = more HP's.
5. Take overwhelming critical once you get to epics and the crits get really fun.
6. You can get +'s to your stun DC in Legendary Dreadnought and from weapons.
7. Trip kopesh in 1 hand, stunner in the other and trip/stun/cleave/great cleave...repeat.
8. Kensi line of enhancements and whatever you want left in human. You can also get some in the stalwart defender line. I take the one
that gives better dodge and dex modifiers. dodge will be more beneficial than AC ( you cant get useful AC unless you really build for it)
9. Get haste boost and you will rip through a lot of content. Even better when your in a good party.
My guy rips through EH stuff with a Hire healer pretty well ( I take the ship dummy down in about 6 to 8 seconds). I cannot really do EE with this build as the survivability is low and hires just cant keep me up. However in a group on EE he does fairly well. My strength may be a touch higher than yours as Im half-orc and have tomes, but you should be able to get into the upper 40's or 50's. If you TR sometime switch to half-orc and go 18 strength/ 16 dex ( with your +1 tome you'll have enough for GTWF)/ rest con. All skill points into Balance/jump whichever you want.
There are 2wf multi class build that do add survivability if this is what you want. If you want to be pure then I would focus on everything to DPS and getting your dodge up. Give up the "Tankish" feats they spread you to thin. When your a pure build you either tank all the way or not at all
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<----- some will disagree and there are builds that can do both, but most of them are multi-class. You could keep Bastard swords but your losing a little DPS, Kopeshes crit more and for higher numbers.