Originally Posted by
Braegan
Pretty weak read to be honest.
You tried to be compelling and story telling. However grammar in points and immersion breaking details in others left your story failing.
Your attempt at being edgy, creative, and jabbing at the games devs just falls flat. I see what you are trying to do. But, your attempt was weak. For all those words (which I did read the whole OP) I really expected more. Talk about a whole bunch of nothing. If you are going to be a critic be somewhat amusing in the process or at least take less time getting to the point.
Sorry man, I am not one of the all is well crowd but your post is pretty bad.
