Issues I see:
- You took the longsword racial & FvS enhs but later mention being Undying Court (scimitars); can't have it both ways. Scimitars > longswords for DPS, so that would be my choice for elven melee FvS.
- DEX 10 is too low for TWF feats and S&B is largely pointless from a DPS perspective.
- Skip the FvS Atk & Dmg boosts; boosting your spellcasting and adding AoV PrE is far more useful.
- FvS can wear med. armor, not just light; the AC doesn't matter and you get free DR from capstone. But Marilith Chain is a good source of Seeker bonus.
Here's my take on a pure elf TWF scimitar FvS:
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Level 20 True Neutral Elf Female
(20 Favored Soul)
Hit Points: 312
Spell Points: 1922
BAB: 15\15\20\25\25
Fortitude: 15
Reflex: 16
Will: 12
Starting Feat/Enhancement
Abilities Base Stats Modified Stats
(32 Point) (Level 1) (Level 20)
Strength 16 23
Dexterity 16 18
Constitution 14 16
Intelligence 10 12
Wisdom 8 10
Charisma 12 16
Tomes Used
+2 Tome of Strength used at level 7
+2 Tome of Dexterity used at level 7
+2 Tome of Constitution used at level 7
+2 Tome of Intelligence used at level 7
+2 Tome of Wisdom used at level 7
+2 Tome of Charisma used at level 7
Level 1 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Diety) Favored by the Undying Court
Feat: (Selected) Two Weapon Fighting
Level 2 (Favored Soul)
Level 3 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Selected) Toughness
Level 4 (Favored Soul)
Ability Raise: STR
Level 5 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Favored Soul Bonus) Energy Resistance: Fire
Level 6 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Selected) Maximize Spell
Level 7 (Favored Soul)
Level 8 (Favored Soul)
Ability Raise: STR
Level 9 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Two Weapon Fighting
Level 10 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Favored Soul Bonus) Energy Resistance: Electricity
Level 11 (Favored Soul)
Level 12 (Favored Soul)
Ability Raise: STR
Feat: (Selected) Quicken Spell
Level 13 (Favored Soul)
Level 14 (Favored Soul)
Level 15 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Favored Soul Bonus) Energy Resistance: Cold
Feat: (Selected) Greater Two Weapon Fighting
Level 16 (Favored Soul)
Ability Raise: STR
Level 17 (Favored Soul)
Level 18 (Favored Soul)
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack
Level 19 (Favored Soul)
Level 20 (Favored Soul)
Ability Raise: STR
Feat: (Diety) Favored Soul Damage Reduction: Cold Iron
Enhancement: Favored Soul Ascendency: Undying Court
Enhancement: Valenar Elf Melee Attack I
Enhancement: Valenar Elf Melee Damage I
Enhancement: Valenar Elf Melee Damage II
Enhancement: Undying Call
Enhancement: Favored Soul Angel of Vengeance I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Angel of Vengeance II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Scimitar Specialization I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Scimitar Specialization II
Enhancement: Racial Toughness I
Enhancement: Racial Toughness II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Smiting I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Smiting II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Life I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Life II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Incredible Smiting I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Incredible Smiting II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Incredible Life I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Prayer of Incredible Life II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Smiting I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Smiting II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Smiting III
Enhancement: Favored Soul Smiting IV
Enhancement: Favored Soul Life Magic I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Life Magic II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Life Magic III
Enhancement: Favored Soul Life Magic IV
Enhancement: Favored Soul Energy of the Scion I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Energy of the Scion II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Energy of the Scion III
Enhancement: Favored Soul Toughness I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Toughness II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Toughness III
Enhancement: Favored Soul Wand and Scroll Mastery I
Enhancement: Favored Soul Wand and Scroll Mastery II
Enhancement: Favored Soul Wand and Scroll Mastery III
Enhancement: Favored Soul Wand and Scroll Mastery IV
Monk 2 splash would get you Evasion & two extra feats (probably Imp Crit Slash and either Emp or Emp Heal), but cost you the capstone.