Obviously based on the thread, this has gone through a number of revisions, but I really like the final one. It's a solid dps build that could probably hate-tank as needed. It is really great that you are doing this for Fighter, because the class has so many feats that it can be hard for new player to pick, and they invariably end up picking something bad.
Leveling tips like using Sword and Shield in early levels if they can keep AC high enough, or THF weapon (even though they have TWF feats) until mid levels or so would be great.
I also /sign that we use this template to replace at least one of the paths. Fighters are a common choice for new players, and it some ways one of the more complicated classes to build due to the multiple feats.