Two versions of the build, please critique.

Power Crit focus:
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Level 20 Lawful Good Drow Female
(6 Fighter \ 14 Monk) 
Hit Points: 331
Spell Points: 0 
BAB: 16\16\21\26\26
Fortitude: 16
Reflex: 14
Will: 13

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats          Modified Stats
(28 Point)       (Level 1)             (Level 20)
Strength             14                    21
Dexterity            17                    17
Constitution         14                    14
Intelligence         10                    10
Wisdom               12                    14
Charisma             10                    10

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills         Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)            (Level 20)
Balance               7                    20
Bluff                 0                     1
Concentration         6                    31
Diplomacy             4                    18
Disable Device        n/a                   n/a
Haggle                0                     0
Heal                  1                     2
Hide                  3                     3
Intimidate            0                     1
Jump                  2                     7
Listen                1                     4
Move Silently         3                     3
Open Lock             n/a                   n/a
Perform               n/a                   n/a
Repair                0                     0
Search                0                     2
Spot                  1                     4
Swim                  2                     5
Tumble                7                    22
Use Magic Device      n/a                   n/a

Level 1 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+4)
Skill: Concentration (+4)
Skill: Diplomacy (+4)
Skill: Tumble (+4)
Feat: (Selected) Martial Weapon Proficiency: Longsword
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Two Weapon Fighting


Level 2 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Toughness


Level 3 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Monk Path) Path of Inevitable Dominion: Fists of Darkness
Feat: (Selected) Weapon Focus: Slashing Weapons


Level 4 (Monk)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)


Level 5 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)


Level 6 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Dodge
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Whirling Steel Strike
Enhancement: Static Charge
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise I
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise II
Enhancement: Monk Improved Recovery I
Enhancement: Monk Ninja Spy I
Enhancement: Void Strike I
Enhancement: Adept of Wind
Enhancement: Adept of Flame
Enhancement: Racial Toughness I
Enhancement: Improved Concentration I
Enhancement: Improved Jump I
Enhancement: Improved Jump II
Enhancement: Improved Tumble I
Enhancement: Improved Tumble II
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom I


Level 7 (Fighter)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Oversized Two Weapon Fighting


Level 8 (Fighter)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Improved Two Weapon Fighting


Level 9 (Fighter)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack


Level 10 (Fighter)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Weapon Specialization: Slashing Weapons


Level 11 (Fighter)
Skill: Concentration (+1)


Level 12 (Fighter)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Improved Critical: Slashing Weapons
Feat: (Selected) Power Critical
Enhancement: Fighter Attack Boost I
Enhancement: Fighter Attack Boost II
Enhancement: Fighter Haste Boost I
Enhancement: Fighter Haste Boost II
Enhancement: Kensei Longsword Mastery I
Enhancement: Fighter Critical Accuracy I
Enhancement: Fighter Critical Accuracy II
Enhancement: Fighter Kensei I
Enhancement: Racial Toughness II
Enhancement: Improved Concentration II
Enhancement: Fighter Strength I
Enhancement: Fighter Strength II
Enhancement: Fighter Toughness I


Level 13 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)


Level 14 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)


Level 15 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Greater Two Weapon Fighting


Level 16 (Monk)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)


Level 17 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)


Level 18 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Toughness


Level 19 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)


Level 20 (Monk)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise III
Enhancement: Touch of Death
Enhancement: Porous Soul
Enhancement: All-Consuming Flame
Enhancement: Monk Improved Recovery II
Enhancement: Monk Ninja Spy II
Enhancement: Eagle Claw Attack
Enhancement: Winter's Touch
Enhancement: Master of Thunder
Enhancement: Master of Bonfires
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom II
Enhancement: Fighter Toughness II
Stunning Focus:
Code:
Character Plan by DDO Character Planner Version 3.7.2
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Level 20 Lawful Good Drow Female
(6 Fighter \ 14 Monk) 
Hit Points: 309
Spell Points: 0 
BAB: 16\16\21\26\26
Fortitude: 16
Reflex: 14
Will: 13

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats          Modified Stats
(28 Point)       (Level 1)             (Level 20)
Strength             14                    21
Dexterity            17                    17
Constitution         14                    14
Intelligence         10                    10
Wisdom               12                    14
Charisma             10                    10

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills         Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)            (Level 20)
Balance               7                    20
Bluff                 0                     1
Concentration         6                    31
Diplomacy             4                    18
Disable Device        n/a                   n/a
Haggle                0                     0
Heal                  1                     2
Hide                  3                     3
Intimidate            0                     1
Jump                  2                     7
Listen                1                     4
Move Silently         3                     3
Open Lock             n/a                   n/a
Perform               n/a                   n/a
Repair                0                     0
Search                0                     2
Spot                  1                     4
Swim                  2                     5
Tumble                7                    22
Use Magic Device      n/a                   n/a

Level 1 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Martial Weapon Proficiency: Longsword
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Two Weapon Fighting


Level 2 (Monk)
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Toughness


Level 3 (Monk)
Feat: (Monk Path) Path of Inevitable Dominion: Fists of Darkness
Feat: (Selected) Weapon Focus: Slashing Weapons


Level 4 (Monk)


Level 5 (Monk)


Level 6 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Dodge
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Whirling Steel Strike
Enhancement: Static Charge
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise I
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise II
Enhancement: Monk Improved Recovery I
Enhancement: Monk Ninja Spy I
Enhancement: Void Strike I
Enhancement: Adept of Wind
Enhancement: Adept of Flame
Enhancement: Racial Toughness I
Enhancement: Improved Concentration I
Enhancement: Improved Jump I
Enhancement: Improved Jump II
Enhancement: Improved Tumble I
Enhancement: Improved Tumble II
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom I


Level 7 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Oversized Two Weapon Fighting


Level 8 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Improved Two Weapon Fighting


Level 9 (Fighter)
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack


Level 10 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Weapon Specialization: Slashing Weapons


Level 11 (Fighter)


Level 12 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Improved Critical: Slashing Weapons
Feat: (Selected) Stunning Blow
Enhancement: Fighter Attack Boost I
Enhancement: Fighter Attack Boost II
Enhancement: Fighter Haste Boost I
Enhancement: Fighter Haste Boost II
Enhancement: Kensei Longsword Mastery I
Enhancement: Fighter Critical Accuracy I
Enhancement: Fighter Critical Accuracy II
Enhancement: Fighter Kensei I
Enhancement: Racial Toughness II
Enhancement: Improved Concentration II
Enhancement: Fighter Strength I
Enhancement: Fighter Strength II
Enhancement: Fighter Toughness I


Level 13 (Monk)


Level 14 (Monk)


Level 15 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Greater Two Weapon Fighting


Level 16 (Monk)


Level 17 (Monk)


Level 18 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Stunning Fist


Level 19 (Monk)


Level 20 (Monk)
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise III
Enhancement: Touch of Death
Enhancement: Porous Soul
Enhancement: All-Consuming Flame
Enhancement: Monk Improved Recovery II
Enhancement: Monk Ninja Spy II
Enhancement: Eagle Claw Attack
Enhancement: Winter's Touch
Enhancement: Master of Thunder
Enhancement: Master of Bonfires
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom II
Enhancement: Fighter Toughness II