Can be good with this build?

[WarBlack]

Hi!

well, i wanna roll a monk, but only have 28pt build, so very limited to the great option who monk do.

here is:

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Level 20 Lawful Neutral Dwarf Male
(20 Monk) 
Hit Points: 366
Spell Points: 0 
BAB: 15\15\20\25\25
Fortitude: 16
Reflex: 16
Will: 17

                  Starting            Ending          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats         Base Stats         Modified Stats
(28 Point)       (Level 1)          (Level 20)           (Level 20)
Strength             15                 21                   21
Dexterity            16                 17                   17
Constitution         14                 14                   16
Intelligence          8                  8                    8
Wisdom               14                 15                   18
Charisma              6                  6                    6

Tomes Used
+1 Tome of Strength used at level 3
+1 Tome of Dexterity used at level 3
+1 Tome of Wisdom used at level 3

                  Starting            Ending          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills        Base Skills        Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)          (Level 20)          (Level 20)
Balance               7                 26                   30
Bluff                -2                 -2                   -2
Concentration         6                 26                   41
Diplomacy            -2                 -2                   -2
Disable Device       n/a               n/a                   n/a
Haggle               -2                 -2                   -2
Heal                  2                  4                    4
Hide                  3                  3                    3
Intimidate           -2                 -2                   -2
Jump                  5                 27                   27
Listen                2                  4                    4
Move Silently         3                  3                    3
Open Lock             n/a               n/a                   n/a
Perform              n/a               n/a                   n/a
Repair               -1                 -1                   -1
Search               -1                 -1                    1
Spot                  2                  4                    4
Swim                  2                  5                    5
Tumble                4                  4                    4
Use Magic Device     n/a               n/a                   n/a

Level 1 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Toughness
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Two Weapon Fighting


Level 2 (Monk)
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Power Attack


Level 3 (Monk)
Feat: (Monk Path) Path of Harmonious Balance: Fists of Light
Feat: (Selected) Toughness


Level 4 (Monk)


Level 5 (Monk)


Level 6 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Luck of Heroes
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Stunning Fist


Level 7 (Monk)


Level 8 (Monk)


Level 9 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Two Weapon Fighting


Level 10 (Monk)


Level 11 (Monk)


Level 12 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Critical: Bludgeoning Weapons


Level 13 (Monk)


Level 14 (Monk)


Level 15 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Greater Two Weapon Fighting


Level 16 (Monk)


Level 17 (Monk)


Level 18 (Monk)
Feat: (Selected) Toughness


Level 19 (Monk)


Level 20 (Monk)
Enhancement: Monk Serenity
Enhancement: Dwarven Constitution I
Enhancement: Dwarven Constitution II
Enhancement: Dwarven Spell Defense I
Enhancement: Dwarven Tactics I
Enhancement: Lifting the Veil
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise I
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise II
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise III
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortoise IV
Enhancement: Fists of Iron
Enhancement: The Receptive Earth
Enhancement: Restoring the Balance
Enhancement: Monk Improved Recovery I
Enhancement: Shintao Monk I
Enhancement: Shintao Monk II
Enhancement: Shintao Monk III
Enhancement: Eagle Claw Attack
Enhancement: Rise of the Phoenix
Enhancement: Void Strike I
Enhancement: Difficulty at the Beginning
Enhancement: Adept of Rock
Enhancement: Adept of Flame
Enhancement: Grandmaster of the Sun
Enhancement: Master of Bonfires
Enhancement: Racial Toughness I
Enhancement: Racial Toughness II
Enhancement: Racial Toughness III
Enhancement: Racial Toughness IV
Enhancement: Improved Concentration I
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom I
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom II
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom III

Any advice? please!

PD: working with my main character, farming motes of night to take cloak - handwraps - robe, but i need create my monk for this!

Sorry for my bad english

[komeback]

With 28 point build I think it would be alot more rewarding to roll a halfling dex based monk with 18 in dex 10 str split what's left in con and wisdom. If your really set on str based dwarf that build would be fine but I would drop dex to 15 and get a plus 2 tome at lvl 7 .

[maha0201]

Build looks solid only thing you will want to have +2 wis and +2 con tome at lvl 18 so you can use Void4
you should see if you can get +2 dex tome so you can start 16 15 14 8 14 6
i would use stuning blow with stuning fist so you can stun more ^^ (you have 3x toughness)
As for PrE req i have monk healing amp over Rise of the Phoenix