Alternative DPS 12 ranger/ 7 fighter/ 1 barbarian

[Perseu]

I have experience create this only on my simulator and haven´t done this in the game yet, i would like some critics and advices from anyone who have played DPS characters.
Thanks for the patience to read and the kindness for answer.

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TESEUS
Level 20 Neutral Good Warforged Male
(7 Fighter \ 1 Barbarian \ 12 Ranger) 
Hit Points: 380
Spell Points: 115 
BAB: 20\20\25\30\30
Fortitude: 20
Reflex: 17
Will: 6

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats          Modified Stats
(34 Point)       (Level 1)             (Level 20)
Strength             18                    26
Dexterity            16                    21
Constitution         16                    20
Intelligence          8                    10
Wisdom                8                    10
Charisma              6                     8

Tomes Used
+2 Tome of Strength used at level 1
+2 Tome of Dexterity used at level 1
+2 Tome of Constitution used at level 1
+2 Tome of Intelligence used at level 1
+2 Tome of Wisdom used at level 1
+2 Tome of Charisma used at level 1

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills         Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)            (Level 20)
Balance               6                    13
Bluff                -1                    -1
Concentration         4                    12
Diplomacy            -1                    -1
Disable Device        n/a                   n/a
Haggle               -1                    -1
Heal                  0                     0
Hide                  4                     3
Intimidate           -1                    -1
Jump                  9                    28
Listen                0                     0
Move Silently         4                     3
Open Lock             n/a                   n/a
Perform              n/a                   n/a
Repair                2                    14
Search                0                    11
Spot                  4                    15
Swim                  5                     7
Tumble                6                     5
Use Magic Device     n/a                   n/a

Level 1 (Ranger)
Feat: (Favored Enemy) Favored Enemy: Evil Outsider
Feat: (Selected) Mithral Body
Feat: (Past Life) Past Life: Ranger


Level 2 (Ranger)


Level 3 (Ranger)
Feat: (Selected) Oversized Two Weapon Fighting


Level 4 (Ranger)


Level 5 (Ranger)
Feat: (Favored Enemy) Favored Enemy: Giant


Level 6 (Ranger)
Feat: (Selected) Dodge


Level 7 (Ranger)


Level 8 (Ranger)


Level 9 (Ranger)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Critical: Slashing Weapons


Level 10 (Ranger)
Feat: (Favored Enemy) Favored Enemy: Dragon


Level 11 (Ranger)


Level 12 (Ranger)
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack


Level 13 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Cleave


Level 14 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Mobility


Level 15 (Fighter)
Feat: (Selected) Toughness


Level 16 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Spring Attack


Level 17 (Fighter)


Level 18 (Fighter)
Feat: (Fighter Bonus) Great Cleave
Feat: (Selected) Lightning Reflexes


Level 19 (Fighter)


Level 20 (Barbarian)
Enhancement: Barbarian Damage Reduction Boost I
Enhancement: Fighter Haste Boost I
Enhancement: Fighter Haste Boost II
Enhancement: Fighter Haste Boost III
Enhancement: Barbarian Power Attack I
Enhancement: Racial Toughness I
Enhancement: Racial Toughness II
Enhancement: Racial Toughness III
Enhancement: Ranger Tempest I
Enhancement: Ranger Tempest II
Enhancement: Ranger Dexterity I
Enhancement: Ranger Dexterity II
Enhancement: Ranger Dexterity III
Enhancement: Fighter Strength I
Enhancement: Fighter Strength II
Enhancement: Fighter Toughness I
Enhancement: Fighter Toughness II
Enhancement: Fighter Toughness III
Enhancement: Warforged Constitution I
Enhancement: Warforged Constitution II
Enhancement: Warforged Damage Reduction I
Enhancement: Warforged Damage Reduction II
Enhancement: Warforged Damage Reduction III
Enhancement: Warforged Healer's Friend I
Enhancement: Warforged Healer's Friend II
Enhancement: Warforged Healer's Friend III
Enhancement: Warforged Power Attack I
Enhancement: Warforged Power Attack II
Enhancement: Warforged Power Attack III

[BLAKROC]

if ya didn't post in a color that is so hard to read you mite get some feedback.

[kanbeki]

Didn't really give it a good look over but lower the dex, unless you're really gunning for some ranged dps you will have 0 ac, even with mithral body and may was well drop it to 13 (base needed for tempest) since you are getting all 3 twf feats for free. could use some wis for sure unless you like greater command.

cleave isn't very good for twf and I would suggest you swap those feats for stunning blow or something along those lines(khopesh prof?)

I might drop mithral body too, you didn't take any of the fluidity feats so even if you didn't drop dex you would be capping your own ac.

so really I'd swap mithral body for toughness, take your first 3 tempest feats, then splash fighter at 7 pick up khopesh and the feats you need for kensai(no clue what those are, but really kensai I might not do much for you)

Also haters gonna hate, seriously that's what people are doing now commenting on text color?

[Aaxeyu]

Why do you have 12 ranger levels?

[gavagai]

I don't see a compelling reason for 7 Fighter or 12 Ranger.

I think with those starting stats (I'm looking at YOU, 16 Dex) you'd be much more effective with a 12Fighter/6Ranger/2Barb. Much more damage potential, still get Ram's Might and Tempest speed boost, and a little better Rage.

I'd also drop Cleave, Great Cleave, and Lightning Reflexes, go with Kopeshes, Weapon Focuses & Specs., and consider Quick Draw because you will be somewhat reliant on boosts for max DPS

[Perseu]

Tks for the advices i will try this modifications