stupid or workable rate and help please

[asmoudeus]

Ill use tombs to boost str , cha , wis. and con as i can afford and get them
skill points will be Intimidate .UMD and Concentration, i really want a pure pally build that can tank and dish out dps
i figured with twf being overall better than thf this build would be more overall dps ( my first build worked out from reading different builds on the forums

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Level 20 Lawful Good Drow Female
(20 Paladin) 
Hit Points: 332
Spell Points: 206 
BAB: 20\20\25\30\30
Fortitude: 22
Reflex: 18
Will: 7

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Stats          Modified Stats
Abilities        (Level 1)             (Level 20)
Strength             12                    14
Dexterity            15                    19
Constitution         14                    14
Intelligence         13                    13
Wisdom                8                     8
Charisma             16                    18

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills         Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)            (Level 20)
Balance               2                     4
Bluff                 3                     4
Concentration         2                     5
Diplomacy             3                     4
Disable Device        n/a                   n/a
Haggle                3                     4
Heal                 -1                    -1
Hide                  2                     4
Intimidate            3                     4
Jump                  1                     2
Listen               -1                     1
Move Silently         2                     4
Open Lock             n/a                   n/a
Perform               n/a                   n/a
Repair                1                     1
Search                1                     3
Spot                 -1                     1
Swim                  1                     2
Tumble                n/a                   n/a
Use Magic Device      n/a                   n/a

Level 1 (Paladin)
Feat: (Selected) Combat Expertise
Enhancement: Paladin Armor Class Boost I
Enhancement: Drow Melee Damage I
Enhancement: Paladin Focus of Good I


Level 2 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Follower of Vulkoor
Enhancement: Paladin Extra Smite Evil I


Level 3 (Paladin)
Feat: (Selected) Two Weapon Fighting
Enhancement: Elven Dexterity I
Enhancement: Paladin Courage of Good I
Enhancement: Paladin Bulwark of Good I
Enhancement: Paladin Resistance of Good I


Level 4 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Armor Class Boost II
Enhancement: Paladin Extra Smite Evil II


Level 5 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Divine Sacrifice I
Enhancement: Paladin Charisma I
Enhancement: Paladin Divine Might I


Level 6 (Paladin)
Feat: (Selected) Toughness
Enhancement: Paladin Defender of Siberys I


Level 7 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Armor Class Boost III
Enhancement: Paladin Divine Righteousness I


Level 8 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Elven Dexterity II


Level 9 (Paladin)
Feat: (Selected) Extend Spell
Enhancement: Paladin Courage of Good II
Enhancement: Paladin Bulwark of Good II


Level 10 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Resistance of Good II
Enhancement: Racial Toughness I
Enhancement: Paladin Toughness I


Level 11 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Resistance of Good III


Level 12 (Paladin)
Feat: (Selected) Weapon Finesse
Enhancement: Paladin Bulwark of Good III
Enhancement: Paladin Defender of Siberys II


Level 13 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Vulkoor's Avatar


Level 14 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Drow Melee Damage II


Level 15 (Paladin)
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack
Enhancement: Paladin Extra Smite Evil III


Level 16 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Exalted Smite I
Enhancement: Paladin Charisma II


Level 17 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Racial Toughness II
Enhancement: Paladin Toughness II


Level 18 (Paladin)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Two Weapon Fighting
Enhancement: Paladin Exalted Smite II
Enhancement: Paladin Defender of Siberys III


Level 19 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Toughness III


Level 20 (Paladin)
Enhancement: Paladin Weapons of Good
Enhancement: Paladin Extra Turning I
Enhancement: Paladin Extra Turning II

[Aesop]

I know this is irrelevant... but I really can't help myself right now


Tombs= Places you bury dead people
Tomes= Books you read

and just because I figure that while I'm being a harpy

Rouge= Red or Cosmetics
Rogue= Sneaky guy what sticks you with sharp pointy objects and takes your ****


Aesop

[Aesop]

I'd rethink this.

you don't have GTWF that's gonna clip your DPS

your strength is abysmally low

Honestly I'd change your stats around a tad

Drop Weapon Finesse from the build entirely drop Dex down to 16 and put a +1 Tome into it to reach the ITWF and GTWF requirements

then dump your level ups in to strength

Charisma I'd say to drop down to a 15 (with the option to put a +1 Tome into the as well)

maybe something like 14 16 12 12 11 15 or 14 16 13 11 10 15 if you can get the +2 Int Tome before you get CE

TWF ITWF GTWF PA IC ... if you want it CE (though getting the good AC can be problematic at times and CE isn't worth the Int unless you are going for good AC) and Extend Spell should round it all out for Feats.

Aesop

[Anarkius]

I am in agreement with Aesop here. You only 'need' a total of 17 DEX for the GTWF. Don't waste the TOMES or ability points in that, other than maybe a +1 Tome.

Your WIS looks way low to me, but I am not sure if you are going for the spell power or not. I think a 'workable WIS should be around 12,

STR and CHA are going to be your big stat scores to beef up the most. Yes if you are going rapiers or short swords the Weapon Finesse feat is nice to have, but not a requirement if you have a good STR score. The AC benefit from DEX is not all that great, especially if you are going with a heavy armor anyway (use mithral to offset any penalties that you may incur otherwise).

Just my opinion...

[asmoudeus]

Thanks for looking it over and the input

and i have always failed at spelling