"Like a Hound run" #2 hit song

[silverraven]

"Like a Hound run" to the words "like a virgin"


I made it through the Subterrane
Somehow I made it through
Didnt know how lost I was
Until I found Xyzzy

I was beat incomplete
Id been had, I was sad and bee'd
But your intimidate
Yeah, you made me feel
Angry and alone

Chorus:

Like a Hound run
Failed for the very first time
Like a Hound run
When your heart beats (after first time, with your heartbeat)
Next to mine

Gonna give you all my Heals, boy
My fear is fading fast
Been saving it all for you
cause only pots can last

Youre so fine and youre mine
Make me fast, yeah you cast your haste
Oh your heals ran out
Yeah, your sp ran out
What was scared and dead

(chorus)

Oooh, oooh, oooh

Youre so fine and youre mine
Ill be yours till the end of time
cause you made me feel
Yeah, you made me feel
Ive nothing to hide

(chorus)

Like a Hound run, ooh, ooh
Like a Hound run
Tryin to pull Tumbleweed
When you intim me, and your heart beats, and you love me

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Ooh, baby
Cant you hear my heart beat
For the very first time?

[Freeman]

Not bad, for a first attempt, but you need some refinement if you want to compete in the next Thelanis Battle of the Bards.(Comng very soon to a Thelanis server near you)

[silverraven]

actually this is my second-by-request...my first attempt is more refined...
http://forums.ddo.com/showthread.php?t=192167