
Originally Posted by
mhykke
actually, No, I'm Not Accusing You Of Being Glib At All. See, This Is Where Your Actual Intelligence Betrays The Way You're Trying To Come Off Through Your Writing. Now You Just Come Off As A Teenager, Or At Most, A College Student, Sitting There Regurgitating Words He Just Read In His Textbook.
By Saying Your Writing Is Flowery, That Means Your Writing Is Way Too Flashy, For Any Forum, Not Even Considering The Informal One Here.
A Person Is Either
1. Not Going To Understand You
Or
2. Understand You, But Think You Are Trying Way Too Hard, And Whatever Point You Were Trying To Make Is Clouded By Your Extreme Effort
So, Since You're Obviously Very Young (i Would Hope, B/c If Not, That Just Means You Are Sorely Lacking In Any Kind Of Social Skills B/c You Just Can't Communicate With People), Here's A Tip: Don't Try So Hard. The Smartest Minds Can Communicate With Their Audience. Impress People With Your Ideas, Not Your Amazing Research Skills Of Looking Up Words In A Thesaurus. Maybe One Day You'll Realize This.
The Smartest People, Throughout History, Can Communicate Their Thoughts, And Present Them In A Manner Where The Thought Isn't Lost In The Language Used. Any Person That Wants To Be A Decent Writer Learns To Keep It Clear. So Maybe You Should Consider A Remedial Writing Class.
As For The Red Herring, You Were The One Who Observed:
Just Commenting On Your Observation..
so, To Sum Up, It's Obvious You've Never Touched A Girl