looking for advanced player input on build

[Mentos3111]

Basically the two builds are just solid dps along with being able to handle traps with
+15 items I have all of them. the +2 cha tome is just gravy looted it and I don't need it. the wf version has 50 ac self buffed no uncanny no nothing just reg bark potion , haste potion, and one tier 3 greensteel weap. same deal on dorf apart from his ac is 48when not fighting giants ect. these builds are designed for max dmg output on bosses due to the insane hp they are starting to get. missing the feat favored enemy elemental for lvl 15 dorf version

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Level 16 Lawful Good Dwarf Male
(1 Monk \ 9 Rogue \ 6 Ranger) 
Hit Points: 162
Spell Points: 55 
BAB: 12\12\17\22
Fortitude: 12
Reflex: 17
Will: 9

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats          Modified Stats
(32 Point)       (Level 1)             (Level 16)
Strength             18                    22
Dexterity            14                    18
Constitution         12                    14
Intelligence         12                    12
Wisdom               12                    14
Charisma              6                     8

Tomes Used
+2 Tome of Wisdom used at level 2
+2 Tome of Charisma used at level 2
+2 Tome of Dexterity used at level 3

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills         Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)            (Level 16)
Balance               6                    18
Bluff                 2                     4
Concentration         1                     2
Diplomacy            -2                    -1
Disable Device        5                    23
Haggle                2                     6
Heal                  1                     2
Hide                  2                     4
Intimidate           -2                    -1
Jump                  8                    22
Listen                1                     2
Move Silently         2                     4
Open Lock             6                    24
Perform              n/a                   n/a
Repair                1                     1
Search                5                    25
Spot                  1                    18
Swim                  4                     6
Tumble                6                    16
Use Magic Device      2                    17

Level 1 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack


Level 2 (Rogue)


Level 3 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Dodge


Level 4 (Rogue)


Level 5 (Rogue)


Level 6 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Mobility


Level 7 (Rogue)


Level 8 (Rogue)


Level 9 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Exotic Weapon Proficiency: Khopesh


Level 10 (Monk)
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Spring Attack


Level 11 (Ranger)
Feat: (Favored Enemy) Favored Enemy: Evil Outsider


Level 12 (Ranger)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Critical: Slashing Weapons


Level 13 (Ranger)


Level 14 (Ranger)


Level 15 (Ranger)
Feat: (Selected) Oversized Two Weapon Fighting


Level 16 (Ranger)
Enhancement: Rogue Haste Boost I
Enhancement: Rogue Haste Boost II
Enhancement: Rogue Haste Boost III
Enhancement: Dwarven Constitution I
Enhancement: Dwarven Constitution II
Enhancement: Dwarven Spell Defense I
Enhancement: Dwarven Spell Defense II
Enhancement: Rogue Subtle Backstabber I
Enhancement: Rogue Subtle Backstabber II
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Attack I
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Damage I
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Damage II
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Defense I
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Resistance I
Enhancement: Ranger Item Defense I
Enhancement: Ranger Tempest I
Enhancement: Rogue Faster Sneaking I
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Accuracy I
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Accuracy II
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Training I
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Training II
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Training III
Enhancement: Rogue Disable Device I
Enhancement: Rogue Disable Device II
Enhancement: Rogue Disable Device III
Enhancement: Rogue Open Lock I
Enhancement: Rogue Open Lock II
Enhancement: Rogue Open Lock III
Enhancement: Rogue Search I
Enhancement: Rogue Search II
Enhancement: Rogue Search III
Enhancement: Rogue Dexterity I
Enhancement: Rogue Dexterity II

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Level 16 Lawful Good Warforged Male
(1 Monk \ 9 Rogue \ 6 Ranger) 
Hit Points: 178
Spell Points: 40 
BAB: 12\12\17\22
Fortitude: 13
Reflex: 15
Will: 8

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats          Modified Stats
(32 Point)       (Level 1)             (Level 16)
Strength             18                    22
Dexterity            12                    15
Constitution         14                    16
Intelligence         11                    12
Wisdom               11                    12
Charisma              6                     6

Tomes Used
+1 Tome of Intelligence used at level 2
+1 Tome of Wisdom used at level 2
+1 Tome of Dexterity used at level 4
+1 Tome of Constitution used at level 5

                  Starting          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills         Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)            (Level 16)
Balance               5                    15
Bluff                -2                    -2
Concentration         2                     3
Diplomacy            -2                    -2
Disable Device        4                    23
Haggle               -2                     3
Heal                  0                     1
Hide                  1                     2
Intimidate           -2                    -2
Jump                  8                    18
Listen                0                     1
Move Silently         1                     2
Open Lock             5                    23
Perform              n/a                   n/a
Repair                0                     1
Search                4                    23
Spot                  4                    14
Swim                  4                     6
Tumble                5                    14
Use Magic Device      2                    16

Level 1 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack


Level 2 (Rogue)


Level 3 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Exotic Weapon Proficiency: Khopesh


Level 4 (Rogue)


Level 5 (Rogue)


Level 6 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Dodge


Level 7 (Rogue)


Level 8 (Rogue)


Level 9 (Rogue)
Feat: (Selected) Mobility
Enhancement: Rogue Haste Boost I
Enhancement: Rogue Skill Boost I
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Training I
Enhancement: Rogue Disable Device I
Enhancement: Rogue Disable Device II
Enhancement: Rogue Disable Device III
Enhancement: Rogue Open Lock I
Enhancement: Rogue Open Lock II
Enhancement: Rogue Search I
Enhancement: Rogue Search II
Enhancement: Rogue Dexterity I
Enhancement: Rogue Dexterity II
Enhancement: Warforged Constitution I
Enhancement: Warforged Damage Reduction I
Enhancement: Warforged Damage Reduction II
Enhancement: Warforged Healer's Friend I
Enhancement: Warforged Healer's Friend II
Enhancement: Warforged Power Attack I


Level 10 (Monk)
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Spring Attack


Level 11 (Ranger)
Feat: (Favored Enemy) Favored Enemy: Evil Outsider


Level 12 (Ranger)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Critical: Slashing Weapons


Level 13 (Ranger)


Level 14 (Ranger)


Level 15 (Ranger)
Feat: (Favored Enemy) Favored Enemy: Elemental
Feat: (Selected) Oversized Two Weapon Fighting


Level 16 (Ranger)
Enhancement: Rogue Haste Boost II
Enhancement: Rogue Haste Boost III
Enhancement: Rogue Skill Boost II
Enhancement: Rogue Subtle Backstabber I
Enhancement: Rogue Subtle Backstabber II
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Damage I
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Damage II
Enhancement: Ranger Favored Defense I
Enhancement: Ranger Item Defense I
Enhancement: Ranger Tempest I
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Accuracy I
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Training II
Enhancement: Rogue Sneak Attack Training III
Enhancement: Rogue Search III

any input would be great. thanks.