New build need help

[Mokeyman]

Plan is 32 point build:Halfing 11 Ranger/2 Rogue/3 Pally=16
Halfing 12 Ranger/2 Rogue/6 Pally=20
lvl1 lvl16
Str 12 +2 tome+6 item 20
Dex 17 +3 tome+3 ranger+3 halfing+6 item 32
Con 12+2 tome+6 item+2 lvl 22
Int 12+1 tome 13
Wis 12+2 tome+6 item 20
Cha 14+2 tome+2 lvl+6 item 26
Skills:
DD
OL
Search
Balance
UMD
Haggle
Jump
Feats:
1.Least Dragon Mark of Healing
3.Weapon finesse
6.Lesser Dragon Mark of Healing
9.IPC:Percing
12.Greater Dragon Mark of Healing
15.CE
LVL Set UP:
1 rogue
2 ranger
3 ranger
4 rogue
5 pally
6 pally
7 ranger
8 ranger
9 ranger
10 ranger
11 ranger
12 ranger
13 pally
14 ranger
15 ranger
16 ranger
Hit Point:
20 heroic duribilty
30 Greater false life
88 ranger
30pally
12 rogue
96 natrual
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276
did i get the hit points right?

AC:
10 base
11 dex
8 armor bonus
3 dodge
3 chattering ring
2 chaos guard
4 bark
2 pally
5 protection
5 CE
1 size bonus
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54
was not sure if i am going to make a shroud item or not for +4 insight
did i miss any that i can get if so plz tell me

Go over it yourself help me plan out mistakes i have and plz tell me i made this build for range and melee so take that in mind and thanks for the help

i am going the 2nd rogue at early lvls so i get evasion right away and some more skills at the start

[Strykersz]

Tell us where the numbers come from.

[ShadowFox1978]

+1 Ac for size. What is the second level of rogue for? You can't say you are using it to catch up skills. It is taken way to early to be a catch up level. If it is for evasion, it is not a great trade-off. You get evasion later from your ranger levels. Unless you have a big argumet for the second rogue, I would suggest 12/3/1, Ranger/pally/rogue.

[Hadrian]

1) Where are you getting an 8 armor bonus from? The only thing I can think of with 8 armor would take the same spot as the chaosgarde. I assume you're not wearing anything but robes or an outfit, so the most armor you can get is +6 while wearing the chaosgarde and retaining that full +11 dex bonus.

You may want to try for the icy raiment. Combine that with AC 8 bracers and you have the equivalent of a +5 mithral BP and chaosgarde, but with no cap on your dexterity.

2) Racial stat enhancements don't go to +3. You have +3 dex from halfling listed, but can only get +2. On the plus side, this means you no longer need a +3 tome to even out.

Also, you didn't add your 4 level-up points. You can get +4 dex that way, and end up with a total of 34 after correcting for the -2 from above. Be careful adding level-up points to other stats. You won't need the +1 saves and umd the charisma gives you as much as the +1 to hit and AC that dex gives you. As for con, what if you went 16 dex to start and pumped con to 14? That way you could put both of those points into dex and get the same con score and +1 dex overall. This would mean you'd require that +3 tome again to hit 34, though.

3) You have dragon marks of healing in place of the spring attack line. You might want to pick up tempest to make your melee more effective and give you +3 AC in total including the dodge feat and the two from tempest. It looks like you're already planning to TWF since you don't list a shield in your AC.