Is this an okay build?

[Bonulino]

I am preparing to TR my pure Barbarian into another pure Barbarian, For my first life, I used one of the predefined paths. I believe I can make a better character by planning my own path, and here is what I came up with. Is there anything grossly wrong with my choices? Suggestions for improvement are greatly appreciated.

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Bonulino Kanto
Level 28 Neutral Good Dwarf Female
(20 Barbarian \ 8 Epic) 
Hit Points: 560
Spell Points: 0 
BAB: 20\20\25\30\30
Fortitude: 19
Reflex: 9
Will: 6

                  Starting            Ending          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats         Base Stats         Modified Stats
(34 Point)       (Level 1)          (Level 28)           (Level 28)
Strength             18                 29                   29
Dexterity            14                 16                   16
Constitution         18                 21                   25
Intelligence          8                 11                   11
Wisdom                8                 11                   11
Charisma              8                  8                    8

Tomes Used
+3 Tome of Strength used at level 1
+2 Tome of Dexterity used at level 1
+2 Tome of Constitution used at level 1
+3 Tome of Intelligence used at level 1
+3 Tome of Wisdom used at level 1

                  Starting            Ending          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills        Base Skills        Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)          (Level 28)          (Level 28)
Balance               4                 14.5                 26.5
Bluff                -1                 -1                    7
Concentration         5                  7                   15
Diplomacy            -1                 -1                    7
Disable Device        n/a               n/a                   n/a
Haggle               -1                  0                    8
Heal                  0                  0                    8
Hide                  3                  3                   11
Intimidate            2                  2                   10
Jump                  6                 22                   30
Listen                2                 16                   24
Move Silently         3                  3                   11
Open Lock             n/a               n/a                  n/a
Perform              n/a               n/a                    n/a
Repair                0                  0                    8
Search                0                  0                   10
Spellcraft            0                  0                    8
Spot                  0.5               12                   20
Swim                  6                 14                   22
Tumble                4                  4                   12
Use Magic Device     n/a               n/a                    n/a

Level 1 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Intimidate (+3)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Listen (+2)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Past Life) Past Life: Barbarian
Feat: (Selected) Power Attack
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Toughness (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Axe Training (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Die Hard (Rank 1)


Level 2 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+0.5)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Armor Mastery (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Extra Rage (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Power Rage (Rank 1)


Level 3 (Barbarian)
Skill: Haggle (+1)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Cleave
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Armor Mastery (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Toughness (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Extra Rage (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Extra Rage (Rank 3)


Level 4 (Barbarian)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Constitution (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Extra Action Boost (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Sprint Boost (Rank 1)


Level 5 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Armor Mastery (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Tactics (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Power Rage (Rank 2)


Level 6 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Feat: (Selected) Great Cleave
Enhancement: Dwarf - Axe Training (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Frenzy (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Extra Action Boost (Rank 2)


Level 7 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+0.5)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Toughness (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Tactics (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Shield Mastery (Rank 1)


Level 8 (Barbarian)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Balance (+0.5)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Cracking Attack (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Body Blow (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Blood Tribute (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Supreme Cleave (Rank 1)


Level 9 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+0.5)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Critical: Slashing Weapons
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Tactics (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Cracking Attack (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Body Blow (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Supreme Cleave (Rank 2)


Level 10 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+0.5)
Skill: Listen (+2)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Power Rage (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Wade In (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Wade In (Rank 2)


Level 11 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+0.5)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Constitution (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Cracking Attack (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Body Blow (Rank 3)


Level 12 (Barbarian)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Two Handed Fighting
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Angry Arms (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Angry Arms (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Angry Arms (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Sprint Boost (Rank 2)


Level 13 (Barbarian)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Toughness (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Blood Tribute (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Focus Wide (Rank 1)


Level 14 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+1.5)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Blood Tribute (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Extra Action Boost (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Focused Wrath (Rank 1)


Level 15 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Skill: Spot (+0.5)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Two Handed Fighting
Enhancement: Dwarf - Axe Training (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Sprint Boost (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Supreme Cleave (Rank 3)


Level 16 (Barbarian)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Jump (+2)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Toughness (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Constitution (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Wade In (Rank 3)


Level 17 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Listen (+2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Crazy Strike (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Exhausting Blow (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Focused Wrath (Rank 2)


Level 18 (Barbarian)
Skill: Jump (+2)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Greater Two Handed Fighting
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Death Frenzy (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Mad Munitions (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Mad Munitions (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Mad Munitions (Rank 3)


Level 19 (Barbarian)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Skill: Listen (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Runes (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Runes (Rank 2)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Constitution (Rank 1)


Level 20 (Barbarian)
Ability Raise: STR
Skill: Listen (+2)
Skill: Spot (+1)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Dwarven Runes (Rank 3)
Enhancement: Dwarf - Axe Training (Rank 1)
Enhancement: Frenzied Berserker (Bar) - Storm's Eye (Rank 1)


Level 21 (Epic)
Feat: (Selected) Epic: Overwhelming Critical


Level 22 (Epic)


Level 23 (Epic)


Level 24 (Epic)
Ability Raise: STR
Feat: (Selected) Epic: Great Strength


Level 25 (Epic)


Level 26 (Epic)
Feat: (Epic Destiny) Epic Destiny: Perfect Two Handed Fighting


Level 27 (Epic)
Feat: (Selected) Epic: Great Strength


Level 28 (Epic)
Ability Raise: CON
Feat: (Epic Destiny) Epic Destiny: Tactician

[Psiandron]

I think that you might want to consider waiting to go Barb again until after they redo the class. Maybe pick up some other PLs.

If you're all fired up to do this, I definitely think you should take the "throw your weight around" dwarf enhancement and redo your build accordingly.

gl

[unbongwah]

As far as pure barbs go, this one looks fine. However, are you sure you want to stick with pure barb? If you're doing it for lore / RPing reasons, that's fine, but the barb capstones are kinda weak (unless you build around OS). Most barbs multi-class a little (or a lot) to gain better DPS, extra feats, limited self-healing, etc.

[the_one_dwarfforged]

you wont gain the full bonus of your tomes at level 1. they increase at lvls 3 (+1) 7 (+2) 11 15 19 and 23. in case you were not aware, it doesnt look like this will affect your build except for skill points.

it looks like you have tactician but not stunning blow, unless you really use your trip a lot you might consider taking perfect two weapon fighting (+5% double strike with your mainhand weapon, may or may not be wai) or elusive target (5% chance to not be hit after all other avoidance defenses have been breached).

instead of great strength id take feats that add a lot more to your effectiveness than just +1 hit/dmg. something like quickdraw (faster weapon swaps, faster throwing speed with throwing weapons, no activation lag when using boosts) or improved sunder (no fail -4 fortitude debuff which stacks up to 5 times and -15% fortification on a successful attempt (this alone is more dps than +2 str)) at lvl 24, and epic damage reduction (+10 prr) at 27.

also have to agree that it would make a lot of sense to splash pretty much any combination of fighter, druid, or fvs/cleric to add a lot to your character while not losing the barbarian flavor.

tywa only applies con to dmg, not hit, and not tactics dcs, personally i wouldnt take it when it would cost ap and nullify the +str from frenzy and death frenzy. 1 step forward and 2 steps back imo.

[Bonulino]

Thank you to the folks who replied to my question. I will go back and do some tweaking to my build.