Originally Posted by
Clayness
Its a good concept for a build, and I think going dwarf is a good pick.
A few nitpicks:
Weapon Finesse - I think you can easily skip this feat, your breakdown says that you will end up with 22 Strength and 24 Dexterity, which means weapon finesse will only give you an increase in +1 hit. You note that you will get 26 or 27 dex once you get an exceptional bonus, which means 28 possibly when you get a +2 shrine on your ship. You could instead get exceptional bonus to strength here, get hit AND damage, instead of purely hit. But if you're meleeing, you typically prefer to get the Burst effect on TOD rings, instead of stat boosts. Getting exceptional bonuses, especially +2, is tough if you go for Burst on your TOD rings (typically you go Holy/Shock).
You can use the Weapon Finesse, and potentially the Maximize, to pick up Weapon Focus and Weapon Specialization to get +1 hit/+2 damage which will help you along greatly. Or you could go with Weapon Focus and Power Attack, getting the hit bonus to support Power Attack in most circumstances should be doable.
With your lower amount of Spell Points, Maximize is a bit dangerous, you can easily soak up alot of SP fast. You're already spreading your roles out when you go melee and healer, trying to add in offensive caster might spread them too thin. You won't have as many spell slots as a full cleric, and if you want to fulfill a healing role there's some spells that are considered must have, and you need some melee buffing spells to go along with the build too.
Your Stunning Fist DC looks fairly decent, running around with 42 or 43 on my Str-based monk myself, and can get away with stunning things in epics, as long as you know which mobs to focus on (let the arcanes handle Hold spells on the melee mobs, while you save your Stunning Fist for casters who tend to have lower Fort saves).
Good concept, looks fun to play, which is most important by far.
I got both a 20 cleric and a 20 monk myself, so feel free to ask if you want some pointers on how to put together their gear.