Looking for feedback on my Monk Build

[Eternity25]

I like playing elves/drow alot. I decided to make Elve so I can get a 32 pt build. Didn't need the Int/Cha, so chose Elf for the dex. I wanted more str than a halfling, I know a dwarf would be the ideal choice for most people, but I only lose about -2 or -4 con from chosing elf.

Ending Stats at lvl 16 would be...

hp-- 234 (with toughness feat and +2 tome)+ 10 AoA Favor+48 [6 item]+30 GFL+18 toughness helm+45 shroud hp item=385 hp

Str= 16base+2 tome+6 item= 24 (with madstone rage, I'd get no penalty to ac, and I would have 26 str)
Dex= 16base+2 enhancement+2tome+6 item=26
Con= 14+2 tome+6 item=22 (With madestone rage, I'd get no penalty to ac, and would have 24 con)
Int--8 base+2 tome=10
Wis=14 base+3 enhancement+1 tome+6 item=24 If I happened to get a +3 Wis Tome, then 26 Wisdom
Cha=8 Base

Max Concentration=34+15 item+2 head of good fortune+4 gh=55
Max Balance=26+15 item+2 head of good fortune+4 gh=47
Max Swim=11+15 item+2 head of good fortune+4 gh=32
Max Tumble=12+15 item+ 2 head of good fortune+4 gh+10 tumble spell=43
Max Jump=7+15 item+30 jump spell+2 head of good fortune+4 gh=58

Max Fort Saves=16+2 Head of Good Fortune+4 gh+5 resistance+1 ritual+3 [6 con item]=31
Max Reflex Saves18+2 Head of Good Fortune+4 gh+5 resistance+1 ritual+3 [6 dex item]=33
Max Will Saves=16+2 Head of Good Fortune+4 gh+5 resistance+1 ritual+3 [6 wis item]=31

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Level 16 Lawful Good Elf Female
(16 Monk) 
Hit Points: 234
Spell Points: 0 
BAB: 12\12\17\22
Fortitude: 16
Reflex: 18
Will: 16

                  Starting            Ending          Feat/Enhancement
Abilities        Base Stats         Base Stats         Modified Stats
(32 Point)       (Level 1)          (Level 16)           (Level 16)
Strength             16                 18                   18
Dexterity            16                 22                   24
Constitution         14                 16                   16
Intelligence          8                 10                   10
Wisdom               14                 15                   18
Charisma              8                  8                    8

Tomes Used
+2 Tome of Intelligence used at level 1
+1 Tome of Wisdom used at level 12
+2 Tome of Strength used at level 16
+2 Tome of Dexterity used at level 16
+2 Tome of Constitution used at level 16

                  Starting            Ending          Feat/Enhancement
                 Base Skills        Base Skills        Modified Skills
Skills           (Level 1)          (Level 16)          (Level 16)
Balance               7                 26                   26
Bluff                -1                 -1                   -1
Concentration         6                 22                   34
Diplomacy            -1                 18                   18
Disable Device        n/a               n/a                   n/a
Haggle               -1                 -1                   -1
Heal                  2                  4                    4
Hide                  3                  7                    7
Intimidate           -1                 -1                   -1
Jump                  3                  7                    7
Listen                2                  4                    6
Move Silently         3                  7                    7
Open Lock             n/a               n/a                   n/a
Perform              n/a               n/a                   n/a
Repair                0                  0                    0
Search                0                  0                    2
Spot                  2                  4                    6
Swim                  5                 11                   11
Tumble                5                 12                   12
Use Magic Device     n/a               n/a                   n/a

Level 1 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+4)
Skill: Concentration (+4)
Skill: Swim (+2)
Skill: Tumble (+2)
Feat: (Selected) Skill Focus: Concentration
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Stunning Fist
Feat: (Automatic) Attack
Feat: (Automatic) Defensive Fighting
Feat: (Automatic) Elven Keen Senses
Feat: (Automatic) Enchantment Save Bonus
Feat: (Automatic) Exotic Weapon Proficiency: Kama
Feat: (Automatic) Exotic Weapon Proficiency: Shuriken
Feat: (Automatic) Finishing Moves
Feat: (Automatic) Flurry of Blows
Feat: (Automatic) Heroic Durability
Feat: (Automatic) Immunity to Sleep
Feat: (Automatic) Ki Strike: Damage
Feat: (Automatic) Martial Weapon Proficiency: Handaxe
Feat: (Automatic) Martial Weapon Proficiency: Longbow
Feat: (Automatic) Martial Weapon Proficiency: Longsword
Feat: (Automatic) Martial Weapon Proficiency: Rapier
Feat: (Automatic) Martial Weapon Proficiency: Shortbow
Feat: (Automatic) Simple Weapon Proficiency: Club
Feat: (Automatic) Simple Weapon Proficiency: Dagger
Feat: (Automatic) Simple Weapon Proficiency: Heavy Crossbow
Feat: (Automatic) Simple Weapon Proficiency: Light Crossbow
Feat: (Automatic) Simple Weapon Proficiency: Quarterstaff
Feat: (Automatic) Simple Weapon Proficiency: Unarmed
Feat: (Automatic) Sneak
Feat: (Automatic) Sunder
Feat: (Automatic) Trip
Feat: (Automatic) Unarmed Strike
Enhancement: Disciple of Breezes
Enhancement: Disciple of Candles
Enhancement: Monk Concentration I


Level 2 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Jump (+2)
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Discipline
Feat: (Automatic) Evasion
Feat: (Automatic) Meditation
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom I


Level 3 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+2)
Feat: (Selected) Dodge
Feat: (Automatic) Fast Movement
Feat: (Automatic) Still Mind
Enhancement: Elven Dexterity I
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortiose I
Enhancement: Fists of Light
Enhancement: Void Strike


Level 4 (Monk)
Ability Raise: DEX
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+2)
Feat: (Automatic) Ki Strike: Magic
Feat: (Automatic) Slow Fall
Enhancement: Lifting the Veil
Enhancement: Monk Concentration II


Level 5 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+2)
Feat: (Automatic) AC Bonus
Feat: (Automatic) Purity of Body


Level 6 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+2)
Feat: (Selected) Luck of Heroes
Feat: (Monk Bonus) Toughness
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortiose II
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom II


Level 7 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+2)
Feat: (Automatic) Wholeness of Body
Enhancement: Adept of Wind
Enhancement: Disciple of Pebbles
Enhancement: Adept of Flame


Level 8 (Monk)
Ability Raise: DEX
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Enhancement: Elven Dexterity II


Level 9 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Great Fortitude
Feat: (Automatic) Improved Evasion
Enhancement: Adept of Rock
Enhancement: Monk Concentration III


Level 10 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Feat: (Automatic) Ki Strike: Lawful
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortiose III
Enhancement: Fists of Iron


Level 11 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Feat: (Automatic) Diamond Body


Level 12 (Monk)
Ability Raise: DEX
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Swim (+1)
Feat: (Automatic) Abundant Step
Enhancement: Monk Wisdom III


Level 13 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Automatic) Diamond Soul
Enhancement: Master of Thunder


Level 14 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Enhancement: Difficulty at the Beginning
Enhancement: Disciple of Puddles


Level 15 (Monk)
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Tumble (+1)
Feat: (Selected) Improved Critical: Thrown Weapons
Feat: (Automatic) Quivering Palm
Enhancement: Way of the Patient Tortiose IV
Enhancement: The Receptive Earth
Enhancement: Restoring the Balance


Level 16 (Monk)
Ability Raise: DEX
Skill: Balance (+1)
Skill: Concentration (+1)
Skill: Diplomacy (+1)
Skill: Jump (+1)
Feat: (Automatic) Ki Strike: Adamantine
Enhancement: Monk Improved Recovery I
Enhancement: Rise of the Phoenix

[Hobgoblin]

why swim?

[Eternity25]

For the Maze in Crucible and to be able to swim faster. Not looking to max it out. Just putting a few points in swim, and using items and buffs for the rest. I want to be good at the Crucible underwater maze, hold my breath underwater longer, and swim ultra-fast. Not expending alot into swim however.

[Strakeln]

why swim?

ROFL!

I read through the entire thing, and that's the one thing that stuck out to me as well

[Lifespawn]

personally i'd drop str 2 and put int up 2 points wis up one for 26 wis and ce with a +3 tome

[Stealthbr]

A +2 Int tome for swim...