Thanks for a great community experience!

[EdsanDarkbane]

I really appreciate all the feedback i get from here.

A song i posted on youtube had a too simliar title to one that was already copyrighted. I posted a new recording on soundcloud. I appreciate ANY feedback. I love to grow and share!

https://soundcloud.com/edwardian-ring


Thanks again guys!

Eddie

[Azarddoze]

I really appreciate all the feedback i get from here.

A song i posted on youtube had a too simliar title to one that was already copyrighted. I posted a new recording on soundcloud. I appreciate ANY feedback. I love to grow and share!

https://soundcloud.com/edwardian-ring


Thanks again guys!

Eddie

I'll have to start by saying that this is MILES away from what I usually enjoy but being a music fan, I gave it a go. I'll briefly comment it for what it is while listening. Some music terms will be wrong as english isn't my main language.

Lyrics and the phrasing are very good. The way you hold some notes and mute your voice makes emotion come out but I feel like sometimes (like in Reiki - but I guess in that case it's wanted because the ending is the intense part), you could push it even a bit more when you want to sound really big. Even when it gets *intense*, the muting is very nice though.

Guitar could get cleaned a little and use a bit more mids in the EQ but I guess that's personal taste. You may have the perfect idea of how you wanted your sound to feel like, I don't.

Let My Hands and Can We were by far my favorites songs, riffs are a bit more groovy, I liked that. Muting is great in these too.

All The Surrender : I also liked this one. Not sure if there's some effect in your voice but it sounds great. I liked the mini riff at 2:28 (I mean the effect it creates), I think you could play a bit more with that kind of guitar intensity sometimes.


Coming from a metal / punk rock guitar player that also writes lyrics... so it's worth what it's worth I guess.

Impressions: I really like the "spacyness" like Tom Yhorke / Radiohead in the sound / recording. As I said, the phrasing when it comes to the voice is very good as well, i'm not that creative musically - you're good. Not nearly good enought in that style to comment chords progression but rhytm is nice, chorus are sometimes just catchy enought to not be disturbing after listening to them just twice. That's a good thing.

Might edit if I give it another shot later, I know this was really brief for explaining music heh.

[EdsanDarkbane]

Thank you for the review. I appreciate honest and constructive feedback, as I would like to improve.

I really am quite speechless and so thankful you spent your time!

Thank you. and Thank You again!

[EdsanDarkbane]

I'm so thankful to you. I feel so thankful and blessed. Thank you again.

[EdsanDarkbane]

Just wanted to ask for some help jump starting my souncloud account. I would deeply appreciate any effort to like/follow or share from my soundcloud account, if its your jam. I am just starting to create an online presence and would love to point to DDO as a major factor in getting me out there.

This community is really rare as far as MMOs go, everyone is really open and always willing to support fresh ideas in-game and irl.

Thank you in advance for your consideration. Feel free to leave honest comments.

AHEM. And is your on khyber, look for Judo setting up a FOT run ;)

[EdsanDarkbane]

Posted a new song!